Sunday, April 3, 2011

Sunday Poetry: Unspoken

by: Lucy R.

We may have only this one night
We both know why we're here
We've danced this dance for quite some time
And held back out of fear

But time is up for this charade
Our decision has been made
I won't ask why you wear that ring
And you won't speak her name

Kiss me with those lips once more
I need to feel your touch
I've dreamt of this for so long now
I've needed this so much

Guide my body, show me how
We both want this
The time is now
Press against me in just that way
I'll pull you closer
We know this game

Don't speak those words
Don't promise more
For now this is all
I'm asking for

by: Lucy R.


  1. I LOVE this poem. There is an exceptional flow and rhythm to it. It's moving and emotional, warm and loving. I don't normally like things about affairs, but you pulled this off in a likable way, Lucy. I just have to feel for the lovers in the poem. You got TALENT, girl! Well done, and I'd love to see more from you.


  2. I thought the picture said it all. Like, a couple in love you know. But your poem really surprised me. A secret affair :) I really loved this!

  3. Oooohhh! I love the whole affair thing going here. It's rare to see a poem like this pulled off well. I can even see this becoming a story..hmmm
    You have a talent. I hope to see more from you!

  4. Thanks all for your wonderful comments. I'm glad you liked it.

  5. I loved everything about this!

  6. Absolutely adored the honesty to emotions i love it



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