by: Lucy R.
Unspoken
We may have only this one night
We both know why we're here
We've danced this dance for quite some time
And held back out of fear
But time is up for this charade
Our decision has been made
I won't ask why you wear that ring
And you won't speak her name
Kiss me with those lips once more
I need to feel your touch
I've dreamt of this for so long now
I've needed this so much
Guide my body, show me how
We both want this
The time is now
Press against me in just that way
I'll pull you closer
We know this game
Don't speak those words
Don't promise more
For now this is all
I'm asking for
by: Lucy R.
I LOVE this poem. There is an exceptional flow and rhythm to it. It's moving and emotional, warm and loving. I don't normally like things about affairs, but you pulled this off in a likable way, Lucy. I just have to feel for the lovers in the poem. You got TALENT, girl! Well done, and I'd love to see more from you.
ReplyDeleteRaven
I thought the picture said it all. Like, a couple in love you know. But your poem really surprised me. A secret affair :) I really loved this!
ReplyDeleteOooohhh! I love the whole affair thing going here. It's rare to see a poem like this pulled off well. I can even see this becoming a story..hmmm
ReplyDeleteYou have a talent. I hope to see more from you!
I. Love. This. Poem!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks all for your wonderful comments. I'm glad you liked it.
ReplyDelete~Lucy
Sexy poem. Very good.
ReplyDeleteI loved everything about this!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely adored the honesty to emotions i love it
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